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| Anonymous Prodigy |
 Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:54 pm |
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Location: United States
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That was AWESOME!  |
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| AgentDrake |
| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:46 pm |
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Joined: 01 Apr 2007
Posts: 667
Location: Halfway between eccentric and insane...
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Anonymous Prodigy wrote: That was AWESOME!
Hahahahahaha....
I now have a new favorite LotR parody.
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| Never kid about politicians. The more bizarre the joke, the more likely it is to come true. |
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| Shieldmaiden |
| Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 4:12 am |
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Location: Edinburgh, Scotland
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I love your third and fourth poems! 56-57 Those are fantastic!  |
Trade With Me, I went to Middle Earth, and all I got was this stupid ring!
Veni, vidi, velcro - I came, I saw, I stuck around. |
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| menace64 |
| Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 7:02 am |
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Joined: 12 Apr 2006
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Location: Wichita, Kansas
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Thanks a lot! I like gold. 
You know how sometimes you feel compelled to write? You feel that sense of flowing words inside, but it just won’t come forth and manifest itself?
This happens to me fairly regularly. I’ll feel something indescribable churning inside the pit of my being, and I recognize it instantly as words trying to escape. Sometimes I decipher them and sometimes I don’t.
Sometimes it takes me six hours to make them appear, as it did tonight. I sacrificed sleep I desperately wanted and, literally, sat around with Word open until it happened. Once it manifested it was written in less than two minutes; it was just waiting for me.
And here it is. My favorite piece of poetry of my entire life, and I’d gladly exchange a month of sleep for another just like it.
Crypsis
I do believe, you can’t deceive
Anything from either of me.
Secret wills and secret lies
I know you better, there’s no disguise.
I’m begging, Crypsis, be known inside my heart.
I know that you’re hiding, hiding painful parts.
But I love you freely, Crypsis, I love you I do
And no past misfortune will be keeping me from you.
You turn away, I can never stay
In the moments of your day.
You mean so much to this daring guy
Who knows you better, sees through your disguise.
I’m begging, Crypsis, be known inside my heart.
I know that you’re hiding, hiding painful parts.
But I love you freely, Crypsis, I love you I do
And no past misfortune will be keeping me from you.
There’s a bright eye awakening from deep within my soul.
There’s a bright hope stretching from here to pole to pole.
There’s this tremendous meltdown of every care I used to hold,
And deep within me, you’re all I want to know.
I’m begging, Crypsis, be known inside my heart.
I know that you’re hiding, hiding painful parts.
But I love you freely, Crypsis, I love you I do
And no past misfortune will be keeping me from you.
I’m begging, Crypsis, be known inside my heart.
I know that you’re hiding, hiding painful parts.
But I love you freely, Crypsis, I love you I do
And no past misfortune will be keeping me from you. |
Riddle 9
When I came to Abraham I let him live just a moment longer. When I came to Moses I saved his life more than once. But the salmon... I regret to say I had a hand in its death.
Who am I? |
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| Celebrimbor |
| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 9:55 pm |
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| You know what that LOTR poem about Frodo was sweet. Have a for that and the crypsis poem. I copied it and saved it, for some more relishing later. |
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