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FM, these all capital letters words in the middle of your writing sure makes it very hard to read... seems like I'm being punched in the face by your emphasis. Punctuation is very helpful for that, you should look into it. Seems like you are shouting words in the middle of it. A good writer should be able to get the message through without SHOUTING or CAPITALIZING the parts he thinks the writer should care about, and it's a lot less aggressive.
Topic: Re: Elf/Dwarf/Sauron Discard (Read 1 times)
