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November 14, 2008, 06:49:42 am
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Re: Three-Word Story
« on: November 14, 2008, 06:49:42 am »
That doesn't make any sense. "On that looked like a" is nonsense. You ruined the flow. It was supposed to be something like: "so he pulled a gun on that lousy scumbag and..."
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